Week 6: i missed it but...been working on storyboarding

I was unwell this week, I think just too much work at work and still trying to do all my uni, so not enough sleep lends to a very sick and dopey Sascha haha.

But I heard we just went through step by step visually a layout by Mark, showing exactly how he would do it step by step. I posted that article last post which sounds like what Mark was trying to explain...but anyhoo update on my storyboarding...Im feeling frustrated, I don't like the shit house drawings of mine. Everything looks flat, doesn't matter how hard I try to concentrate on the techniques of the thirds rule etc and others for composition...mine still look shit...Here are a few I've done thus far...

I think it is I don't like the way my people look...too manequin like or something...what I would give to be able to draw people like Sarah or Rachel...:(

I also didn't like the pencil on its on, so I added copic marker and fineliner for some other details...to give a bit of dimension.